Strip tease

[kingandy]

Okay, this is me being productive, and experimenting and shit. It's supposed to be a sort of a "daily strip" format, with a punchline every day, but the first one's very much just a setup thing.

I think they've come out okay visually, despite me being lazy and not colouring or shading the people at all. Given my perfectionist nature, I would have been there all day so it seems best to just shade the background.




Suggestions?

Comments

[mrssshhh.livejournal.com]

4th cell, 2nd strip & 2nd cell, 3rd strip - Iain has tits. The way his shirt curves is too much for a mere manly physique; the boy has breasts. Real ones.

Other than that, it's stellar work.

[r-dragonsbain.livejournal.com]

I disagree, the 4th cell of the 2nd strip looks like Ian has tits until you see that his lady frend has her left arm inside his top and is giving his manly cheast a rub.....

[kingandy]

That works for me.