All existing characters rang true - especially AndrAIa and Matrix. Li'l Enzo was particularly convincing which is impressive, considering he was only in it for a line at the end. I enjoyed the story and it fit in well with the world of ReBoot (my interpretation at least). The story seemed aimed more for a younger audience but then the cartoon was and its difficult to get in the visual reference gags that made the series appeal to adults when you're only using text.
Hooray! I am pleased. I have seen so many people get so much wrong, and I'm sure each and every one of them thought they were doing fine, that I was a bit worried.
If I do more fanfic, I'm sure I'll continue to pepper it with exposition about my personal views on the ReBoot world and mechanics. Like, how sprites aren't actually human, and they're not really wearing clothes...
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Cute!
Date: 2004-10-12 05:25 am (UTC)I enjoyed the story and it fit in well with the world of ReBoot (my interpretation at least).
The story seemed aimed more for a younger audience but then the cartoon was and its difficult to get in the visual reference gags that made the series appeal to adults when you're only using text.
I liked it.
Re: Cute!
Date: 2004-10-12 06:47 am (UTC)If I do more fanfic, I'm sure I'll continue to pepper it with exposition about my personal views on the ReBoot world and mechanics. Like, how sprites aren't actually human, and they're not really wearing clothes...