I liked the girl, she was fun. And much of the story was intresting. It just fell down at the end and nothing much was really cleared up. I don't think I want to live in a world where so much apparently hangs on two adolescents getting it on. It's a bit paedophilic, and I felt slightly uncomfortable reading that scene.
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Date: 2003-10-23 03:52 am (UTC)